The feedback on my previous piece of writing on resilience is a bit unexpected. Apparently my supervisors and I have some disagreement on our perception of resilience. The resilience I am familiar with has a strong ecological origin and may not be quite the same as those about social-economic systems. It is suggested that I take a look at vulnerability studies in both social and ecological terms.
The introduce of the concept in my writing is a bit too steep. Considering the audience of my thesis I am also told to rewrite the piece to make it more understandable by others. More examples, if available, can make my writing more detailed and grounded.
The following three week or so, I will divert considerable time and effort to make a series of plans for the field trip. It is not as interesting as studying concepts, but will be an essential part of my project.
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